10+ I love religious pictures

Nice work!

Nice one! You´re good with the pencils... Some lines on her body seems a little bit to intense, because it´s more brighter than the cloth on her head... You understand what I mean?

But it´s still a very nice piece!!!

good pencil work. You shade differently to me, but I am not as patient as you.8+

nice shading ^_^

Something really wierd with the perspective here, or the structure of her face. I don't know, maybe someone else can pinpoint it.

Shading looks good, though I think maybe you need to push your middle values more. Maybe try your hand at charcoal sometimes, it really gives you more expressive strokes and a more even black.

Good shading and composition. Pencil all the way!

Nice. The lighting and shading on the head is good, on the dress it could be stronger.

And, no, szilvia, i didn't mean less dress...

thank you all for the great and thoughtful comments i have to admit that i had no patience to finish the dress... and the photo is not the best either, that's why the middletones cannot be seen well
thank you again!!!!!!

i love your style boszi , very nice style , and anatomy expression, you have a future

yea, too bad scanning never does artwork any justice

you have all these amazing works here and you come in and say the nicest things about my mediocre practices >.< i feel ashamed... ASHAMED, i tell you

it's so crisp and clean, yet still serene... i likes

I ike it!!!!!!!!!!
->Jó.Szépek a tónusok csak szerintem
1 kicsit az aranyok nem stimmelnek.
pl:a koponya nagy az arcahoz képest....
De pöpec!!!!!!!!!!!zsir lett!!!!
Még ilyet!!!!!!!
+8

Wooowww (+7), Colorless Pencil works... always pure, always best.

you just can't beat pencils...especially yours...

the dress is awesome..almost has some Futurist feel to it...wish I could see the original..